‘In breath of my lung they remain’ - feels so intimate .
Feels like you’ve touched on the juxtaposition of poetry and spoken words . The words are on our breath and we need to bring them to the page. Isn’t this the challenge of every poet that ever was ? To being the breath to the page ? 🙏🏻💫🥰
Thank you, I just found this comment! Yes I think that's exactly what my subconscious was trying to say. Thank you for your ever astute observations my love xx
Love this poem , Louise .
The line -
‘In breath of my lung they remain’ - feels so intimate .
Feels like you’ve touched on the juxtaposition of poetry and spoken words . The words are on our breath and we need to bring them to the page. Isn’t this the challenge of every poet that ever was ? To being the breath to the page ? 🙏🏻💫🥰
Thank you, I just found this comment! Yes I think that's exactly what my subconscious was trying to say. Thank you for your ever astute observations my love xx
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