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Tamy Faierman M.D.'s avatar

Love this poem , Louise .

The line -

‘In breath of my lung they remain’ - feels so intimate .

Feels like you’ve touched on the juxtaposition of poetry and spoken words . The words are on our breath and we need to bring them to the page. Isn’t this the challenge of every poet that ever was ? To being the breath to the page ? 🙏🏻💫🥰

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